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Stealth by ~haohaohayashi:iconhaohaohayashi:

Categories Traditional Art > Drawings > Miscellaneous

©2008-2010 ~haohaohayashi
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Bit cropped off, but my other photo of it was kinda blurry.
Anywayz I might go back to this and tweak it up a bit more but for now I shall say its done cause I got other projects to do xD.

In case you don't know, this is a dude cheating off his classmate. Hence the title. (sorta)

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~KaliDesarai Oct 7, 2008, 8:31:52 PM
I love the funky angle of this. Very cool. ^_^

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~haohaohayashi Oct 7, 2008, 8:32:01 PM
PLEASE when you comment please include a criticism for this one. Something is off, or atleast preventing this piece from fully achieving its pinnacle state, and I'm sick of doing that = =;;. I love this composition and I don't want to see this one....err...not blossom? ^^;; yea.

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~Ars-Est-Aevum Oct 7, 2008, 8:32:07 PM
This perspective is fantastic.

One might go as far as to call it fan-fucking-tastic.

Great idea, great perspective, great execution.
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~haohaohayashi Oct 7, 2008, 8:32:44 PM
thanks haha where do you think i should darken the values o_O if i did have to

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~haohaohayashi Oct 7, 2008, 8:33:49 PM
thank you sir your sketchbook works are very nice btw :)

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~Trinity630 Oct 7, 2008, 8:53:26 PM
The chosen perspective for this idea. If I had to say something, I guess I'd have to say there's not enough contrast between black and white. The black areas seem like they could be darker, though this is just me.

The top-half of the pencil near the thumb looks a little off to me. Kinda looks like it get a little bit wider there.

Overall, nice composition.

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~Trinity630 Oct 7, 2008, 8:54:44 PM
Ugh I screwd up my first sentence. "The chosen perspective for this idea makes it great." Yaaaaaargh.

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~haohaohayashi Oct 7, 2008, 9:22:47 PM
Yea thats what i'm teacher is telling me too. I agree but i dont quite know where to exactly darken my areas. Cast shadow of person? the shirt? the hand?

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~KaliDesarai Oct 7, 2008, 9:51:59 PM
Hmm... in the shirt sleeve and on the palm of the hand... It might help if you pulled some lights out on the top half of the dark side of the hair, and then on the top of the arm and hand. Not much, but even a little will give more contrast.

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